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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(44):青少年的秘密该不该让父母知道

发布时间:2014-11-27 10:50浏览次数:2075
要求:
请根据以下任务说明和写作要求,写一篇幅150词左右的英文短文。
Teenagers’ secrets should be kept to themselves and no one else ,their parents included, has the right to stick their nose into their private life. As we know, teenagers are going through a special period of development both physically and psychologically. They are curious about and puzzled by the unexpected changes in their body and mind. What’s more, exposed to a world of adults, it is only too natural for them to begin imitating (模仿) adults’ behaviors in secret. Boys begin to smoke and girls begin to spend time doing their hair. Some even begin to date with a girlfriend or boyfriend without their parents’ knowledge. They are doing al this in secret because they are still unsure whether it is right to do so and afraid that ,if found out by their parent, they will get misunderstood and even punished. And in fact, in many cases, the parents can not deal with the matter well and hurt their children’s feelings badly, making children no longer willing to communicate with their parents. When this happens, it hurts terribly the whole family feeling. So it seems right that teenagers should keep their secrets to themselves and their parents should allow their children that right.
[写作内容]
概括短文内容要点,该部分约30词;
(2 )就 “青少年的秘密该不该让父母知道” 这一话题发表你的看法,
至少包含以下内容要点;该部分约120词;
A: 你是否与父母分享你的秘密;
B: 你是如何看待你的做法的;
C: 父母对你的做法有何反应;
D: 你是如何看待父母的看法或做法的?为什么?

[写作要求]

1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接原文抄袭;

2.题目自拟。
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评语:

文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Teenagers' Secrets Should Be Share With Their Parents. Everyone has secrets and many or a little.So do I.Lots of youth are not like to share any secrets to their parents.But I will,and I take consideration with parents age that older than me.However,they know many things that I don't know.Sharing the secrets with parents not only let parents understand us ,but also can help us solve problem when we trigger the hard.

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