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Today,an increasing number of people like keeping pets,such as dogs,rabbit,and all that. They say that pets can not only enrich our life,but also relas us from the heavy life pressure.Besides,pets play with the yong and accompany the old helping them get rid of loneliness. However , there are lots of people who disagree to raise pets.For they think,the sound of pets might a bad influence to neighbours，so does the excrement.Moreover,something what will make people ill might hide in the body of pets and no one will know wether it will break out or no. In my opinion, keeping pets brings joy to our life. But it is important to avoid potential risks and troubles,so we should bring our pets to animal hopital to do some checkup once a month.In addition,we have to make sure that the behaviors of pets are under control.Having finish these,we can bury us under the happiness from our pet.
