2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am very happy receive you letter.you say in the letter that you wil come from my hometown.we are separate a lot of long time since we graduate from highshcoll.if you come I am very pleased for you introduce my hometown some of special snack and beautiful scenery. for example