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As it says,it's not really smart to get a conclusion right now after seeing or hereing something. First,we can't juge a thing with our eyes or ears only.Things have diffirent ways to show eveyone.So we do not get a same information about a thing.It is hard to say what is the truth.Second,the process of thinking is so important that we can make a right choice.We can't be so quickly to make a dicision.The faster we get a "truth",the more we be silly.Thirdly,we don't kown clearly about a thing what we see or here.Why should we not wait for somewhile?And the truth will float on the water by itself. As far as I'm concerned,don't juge a thing without thingking.
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