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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
As is described in the picture,a bottle fall down,only a little liquid stay in.Beside the bottle have two people,one feel disappointed and say "it's over',another has a better motion because he thinks it is a lucky that still a little in the bottle.What is conveyed in the picture is most meaningful and thought-provoking in terms of the attitude to frustration. Different attitude has different result.Optimistic leads us to see the positive side of the things,can make we have a beautiful day.On the contrary,pessimistic leads us to see the negetive side of the things,this kind of people continue complain this things that have lost,finally,they have a black day.In short,attitude can decide a man will success or failure. In my point of view,we should learn from the optimistic people.whatever happened in our daily life,we should keep a positive attitude to face it.Only in this can we success.
