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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Numerous choices come to us every day, each leads to different consequence, and it is essential to come up with the best one. Different individuals make different decision, but it is widely accepted that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. Genarally speaking, it will take a serious of lost once our decision leads to an outcome not ideal if we put all eggs in one basket. Because we cut all ways behind us expect the one we have chosen. We cannot go back, just can walk forward. As a result, sometimes, we go further and further on the wrong way. To be a wise man, on the contrary, it is necessary to learn how to distribute eggs we have to different baskets. For instance, one man expect to gain more money from what he has now, then he face a lot of choices to investing. If he decides to invest only one program, he will face large risks. It is better for him to invest different programs with various amount of money. In short, putting all eggs in one basket leads to high risk. It is sensible to distribute.

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