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shopping when you are in need As we know,many of us ,as a student,have not much money for our daily life.In fact we students also do not need much money to buy many expensive thinks because we are supposed to cultivate excellent habit such as saving.So in my mind i think we students have some money to meet our need is reasonable.We do not need much money.From my point of view,if we have too many money and wo do not how to exactly use the money.And it will cause waste of money.Then the another reason is that too much money is likely to make us student become luxurious.SO from mentioned above,making a conclusion:we student do not need too much money ,we just need some money to meet our daily life need.
