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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富多样,学术词汇使用较熟练;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Recent years we always read some untrue reports in the media.As a result they misleaded the public and brought about bad effect on our society.Why are these happening?Mostly because some people tend to jump to conclusion upon seeing and hearing. Apparently,this practice is very unwise. Just recently,for example, when a journalist saw that a doctor was talking with a person unlike patient in the hospital,he immediately wrote a report that the doctor have taken kickbacks.But the fact is that the person only is the doctor's acquaintance (friend).This negative report not only hurt doctors image,but also raised the public indignation,and maked the doctor-patient relationship more tense. These are bad for social stability and unity. As contemporary college students,we should improve our abilities of judging right from wrong.More importantly,we should establish awareness that do not jump to conclusion upon we have seen and heard.

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