过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者学术词汇量积累不足,部分单词有拼写错误;请注意分段。
Living in an era of information explosion,we receive thousands of messages a day,and cannot tell whether they are true or not.Under this circumstance,most of us are inclined to believe in what they have seen or listened without a second thinking before coming to a conclusion. The reason why I persist in the standpoint that we never indirectly and rashly reach a conclusion only by listening or seeing mostly depend on the two aspects below.Above all,high speed of internet technology immerses in our daily life,almost everyone has a smart phone and share everything on internet ,while the relevant laws fall short.And thus ,some people make full use of this gap to advertise a large number of illusive commerces for some purpose.take showbiz an example ,many stars are famous for chaozuo.in addition,not everything can present all sides at a time,such as some unexpectedly news.our journalists may publish what they have learned to newspaper,but it doesnnot mean what they report is the truth of the case,for the police still investigate,and they may only notice the only side of the case.So if we conclude at tne beginning,we may get a mistaken information.As a result,only being meticulous about everything around us,thinking over can we arrive at a rational conclusion.
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