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There is a popular saying that believe in yourself is the secret of success.I think the saying has much truth in it. When we do a task,we should do it by ourself.The first time we do something is not only depend on the experiencewe have,but whether believe in ourself. One can achieve a success only by believe in yourself.For a instance,in the ancient time,there is a people called MaoSui whom need a chance to prove himself and make a success. Not like other people who wait for the chance,Mao was introduce himself to everyone and catchthe chance to achieve success. Meanwhile,believe in yourself is not the only thing that matters.Even if you believe in yourself,it dose not mean you will make a success,but if you do not believe in yourself,you will difinitely fail.Therefore,you have to beileve in yourself,that is the secret of success.