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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(31)写作:Believe in Yourself,And You Will Win

发布时间:2013-09-13 16:20浏览次数:3515[网页划词已开启]
要求:
面对幸福的学校生活,大家可能有共同的感受,那就是尽情地享受吧;而面对困难时,我们的态度可能就会有所不同。你又会是怎么样呢?请以“Believe in Yourself,And You Will Win”为题,写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到困难并战胜它们的短文。
要求:80词左右,要切合题意,内容完整,书写规范。
提示:
1.你遇到了什么困难?
2.你是如何克服困难的?
3.你从此事中体会到了什么?
用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
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行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;有效的运用了一些复杂句;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且检查文中的拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

There is a popular saying that believe in yourself is the secret of success.I think the saying has much truth in it. When we do a task,we should do it by ourself.The first time we do something is not only depend on the experiencewe have,but whether believe in ourself. One can achieve a success only by believe in yourself.For a instance,in the ancient time,there is a people called MaoSui whom need a chance to prove himself and make a success. Not like other people who wait for the chance,Mao was introduce himself to everyone and catchthe chance to achieve success. Meanwhile,believe in yourself is not the only thing that matters.Even if you believe in yourself,it dose not mean you will make a success,but if you do not believe in yourself,you will difinitely fail.Therefore,you have to beileve in yourself,that is the secret of success.

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