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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

It is not wise to believe a snap judgment. People make correct and proper judgments based on reliable materials and reasonable evidences. In complicated cases, to make sure those materials and evidences reliable, may take a great deal of time and efforts, especially in law affairs and company plans. However, if decision makers are not quite rational, and make decision without enough preparations, judgments will become questionable. Whenever a mistake makes, consequences may destroyable. When I was working in a school laboratory, my first work is to design a new device, high performance absorber, which its construction is not very complicated. I finish my idea quickly, and begin my work.

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