作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;采用了一些简单的从句;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
First I am very thank you to giving chance to cooperate with your company. there are some problem following producing and delivery ,.in order to get satisfaction from customer and push something to go well,i give an apology and promise to be complained.i accept your criticism and attention.i am sorry that i bring some problem to you the inconvenience.i am expressing the most sincere apology to you. part a :hubeipufang part b: comercial the part a and part b have agreed to sale contract,the contract number is pfc 13116 delivery date is late.the part a and part b have agreed to delivery by air.the air freight is share together . some waist size is different from request,now production have been improved in chile,some charge of re-mending production is pay for it from part a. in view of this problem.i have the full range of reflection .for the problems caused by the loss of your company.we willing to accept reasonable treatment measures proposed bu you company.