文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
Write what you see is not unwise Nowdays people always make conclusions on what they see or what they hear at once.They think what they seeing or hearing by themselves must be really. But in fact this is unwise. Once I saw the picture, it gave me deep impression.On the picture I saw there are two people, on take a kinfe to catch another who is runing, but some people see oppersite.Why because they only see the part of the picture.This picture reveals to tell us sometimes what we see is not the ture,hearing is the same principle.In fact this phonomen is commen in our daily life.Like we always see some faule information but pass way this crazily and comment on it. In my oppion,what we see or hear may be not ture.So we should not make conclusions quickly after what we see or hear.We should make conclusions after carefully inquire into things and think.Only in this we can we dont cheated by surface and make less misunderstand.
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