文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
As it says,it's not really smart to get a conclusion right now after seeing or herring something. First,we judge a thing not with our eyes or ears only.Things are showed to everyone in different ways.So we do not get the same information about a thing.It is hard to say what is the truth.Second,the process of thinking is so important that we can make a right choice.We can't be so quickly to make a decision.The faster we gain a truth,the more we be silly.Thirdly,the thing we saw only might do a truth.Why should we not wait for somewhile? The truth will float on the water by itself. As far as I'm concerned,don't judge a thing quickly.
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