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Dear editor, With the entrance exam approaching,some students feel nervous and stressed.Many students stay up so late that sleepy in tomorrow classes.It's no doublt that they won't finish the course well.So students should sleep early in order to have enough sleep.Besides,many students stressed before the exam,I advise that they should pay attention to going over.The more we know,the great progress we will make. Be confident and patient,and you will succed.I hope studends can achieve their dreams.What's more,I would appreciate it if you could share your thoughts with me. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming
