文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;采用了一些简单的从句;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
I'm writing to share some problems which our students ofen have before taking tests. Some students always stay up too late to they can't keep awake in the following day's class.In the way can they not only get no improvement,but also keep studying as normal.In my opinion,students should arrang the reciting time considerate instead of stay up blindly,which can be great help of improve the efficiency of studying. I hope that everyone can get a high score.And i an looking forward to recieving your letter.