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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。
Dear editor, I am writing to you for some suggestions about the questions before the exam.And I will appreciate it very much if you could give me some suggestions about it. First of all,many students stay up late to learn.Although this is a good way to study.In my opinion,it will make us very sleepy on the classes.It is not a clever choice.Secondly,I think we should arrange the time of learning well.And make our study better and better.Only in this way can we get a good grade.Last but not least,I hope that all of us can get the great grade. I will appreciate it if you can give me some suggestions about it.And I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
