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Dear editor I'm writing to share with you some problems that our students met before taking an exam. First of all,some students usually study late into the night ,which causes sleepy when they have lessons the next day and they can't study as usual.As far as I'm concerned,It is very important to have a good arrangement ,especially before the text. Finally,I hope all the students could get a good grade.Besides,could you give me a letter about what you think?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.