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Dear editor, My friend, Cathy, fell asleep again in class. I woke her up, for she had missed a lot of notes on the blackboard and the teacher became very angry. Afterwards Cathy told me that she stayed up late last night. And I learned that many other students did so for the coming examination. I don’t think it good to stay up late before an examination. Instead, I think we should arrange our time well so that we can do our best. I hope all my classmates can get good marks in this examination. Do you have any good suggestions on how to prepare for exams? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming
