文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视。
I'm writing to share some problems which our students often have before taking tests. Some students always stay up too late to they can't be awake in the following day's class.In the way can they not only get no improvement,but also keep studying as normal.In my opinion,students should arrang the reciting time considerately instead of staying up blindly,which can be great help of improving the efficiency of studying. I hope that everyone can get a high score.And I am looking forward to recieving your letter.