2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays As is shown in the graph,the education is higher,the proportion is lower.On the contrast,as for the median weekiy earings in 2011,people with higher degree earn more than those with even not a high school degree.It clearly shows that education really pays. Education pays in higher earnings and lower in unemploymeng rates.So what leads to this sitution?As we all know,firstly,education provides people more oppotinuties to learn more knowledge.Also,we can get advanced skills from long learning. All in all,it's not such a bad thing to be educated more.In the society,people with higher degree indeed get more.