2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

As is shown in the graph,the education is higher,while the proportion is lower.On the contrast,as for the median weekiy earings in 2011,people with higher degree earn more than those with even not a high school degree.It clearly shows that education really pays. Education pays in higher earnings and lower in unemployment rates.So what leads to this situation?As we all know,firstly,education provides people with more opportinuties to learn more knowledge.Also,we can get advanced skills from learning. All in all,it's not such a dreadful thing to be educated more.In the society,people with higher degree indeed get more.