2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

As is shown in the graph,the education is higher,while the proportion is lower.On the contrast,as for the median weekiy earnings in 2011,people with higher degree earn more than those with even not a high school degree.It clearly shows that education really pays. Education pays in higher earnings and lower in unemployment rates.So what leads to this situation?As we all know,firstly,education provides people with more opportunities to learn more knowledge.Also,we can get advanced skills from learning.Lastly,the more education we receive,the better we can handle problems and stress confronted in our carees. All in all,it's not such a dreadful thing to be educated more.In the society,people with higher degree indeed get more.