2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

As is shown in the graph,the education is higher,while the proportion is lower.On the contrast,as for the median weekly earnings in 2011,people with higher degree earn more than those with even not a high school degree.It clearly shows that education really pays. Education pays in higher earnings and reduces in unemployment rates.So what leads to this situation?As we all know,firstly,education provides people with more opportunities to get more basic knowledge.Also,we can get advanced skills from learning.Lastly,the more education we receive,the better we can handle problems. All in all,it's not such a dreadful thing to be educated more.In the society,people with higher degree indeed get more.