2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Creating a Green Campus Creating a green campus is an important thing. In our impression,maybe green campus is planting more trees,grass or other plants.But actually,green campus is not only including the plants,but also the imagine of the students.So,in order to make our campus better,we should take some treasures. At first,the teachers should teach the students how to recognise themselves,let the students know what they are doing and why they should do.The second,the leader of the campus should create some healthy and interesting activities,this kind of activeties will make students relaxing themselves and develop their confidence.The third,make our study environment better,it including teaching tools,the way of teaching,and some others.At last,we must keep the plants in our campus green and growing,make the campus green from the surface. If we can finished the treasures above,we will have a real green campus.