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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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学术词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;文章层次较为清晰;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。

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Trust is a typical topic that every one of us is quite familiar with. However it has been giving much more emphsis nowadays because it is critical for us to appeal for maintaining trust between people. As a side-effect of the prosperity of the market economy, the absence of trust is partly contribute to dishonesty of some businessmen and manufacturers who make or sale shoddy and unqulafied products to pursuit a bigger profit. It resulted in the untrusting between people. While the untrusting, in return, make it more difficult to pursuit a bigger profit for it takes more time and energy to convince people into buying commodities. What's worse, it may lose the potential customers and result in it's collapse. It goes for the interpersonal relationship. Can we image what it would look like if we live in a world without trust? It must be cold and misery. Therefore, it is high time for us to strengthen the importance of maintaining trust to creat a better life.

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