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As is known to all, persistence is the first step to be successful. if you can stick to do a thing,you have finished the half of the purpose. Such as the saying goes'Easier said than done',and it is not an exception. The people who can succeed are in possession of insistent willing.To taking quitting smoking as an example. Quitting smoking seems easier,but not many people can really be successful.Just as the humourous saying goes'Giving up smoking is the easiest thing in the world, i have hundreds of times'. Nobody can succeed without a strong willing. It is also significant for a student to study hard.God helps those who helps themselves.if you have not a dillegent heart to gain knowledge,no one can guarrantee you a satisfactory future.To sum up, it is so important to insist in doing something.