2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,many parents have got everything already for their children,for their worried.On the one hand,they think that their children have no ability to solve problem what they have cause.So they want to replace to do what their children do to solve that the problem may be caused. On the other hand,they considered their children maybe forget that consequence caused by personal determine.It is not a health phenomenon that parents do all of things what should have did by their children. In order to solving the problem that child have no ability of independence.I suggest that parents should kept the distance when their children do something even though the fault will be caused at once.Of course,except the worse dangerous.Parents not only do the things above this sentence,but also teach your baby to bear the response that they have.