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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3009[网页划词已开启]
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句的使用;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

Just as the saying goes" Every road to Romma",in China of own time,we have more choicesof being successful in face of various lines.So at the same time ,perhaps inevitablely,we should make a decision depneded on ourselves which is the best ways to choice.But whatever a industy you want to be involved in,first,you must make full prepartions. Not only the professional knoledage we must get, but also the humanstic study we need as well.Professional techonolgy can teach us how to do and humanstic study can make us know what should do.Without humanstic study,we 're improverished as well.Becuse a man's success involved in various fileds besides our careers which including family happiness,health,and etc. In all,as the Lincoln's famous remark says"Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will pend the first four sharpening the axe." ,before we start our careers ,we should make full prepartions for the challenage we might directly in the face of in our uncertain future.

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