小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i had made many friends in past two yeas.friends is more important in our life,when we feel happy ,we need someone to share with, when we feel sad, we want talk to somebody. xiaoming is one of my friends, he is tall and have a black hair,he is sunshine and outgoing,clever and have a good grade.