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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

There are saying goes that never judge a person by his looks, to which I can't agree more. It is unwise to judge people by their appearance because it might be misleading and deceptive. Nowadays, the phenomenon is pervasive and prevalent that beautiful people are usually regarded as vase, which own good looks but lack the intelligence. Nevertheless, there were four beautiful people in Chinese history, which is known not just for good looks but also because each of them played a critical role in their life times. Wang zhaojun offered to marry a man from a far away tribe for the sake of harmony among people of different ethic backgrounds. Yang yuan was a concubine who hung herself during the mutiny for the benefit of the overall situation. So, these women are remembered not just for their good looks, also for their intelligence, bravery, dedication. In real life, we tend to make friends with and fall in love with someone who is good-looking. However, these people frequently turned out to be hypocrite and hurt us deeply. In conclusion, never judge people by their appearance or trust people who are good-looking easily. It is great significant for us to inner cultivation.

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