Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇表达不够灵活,拼写错误比较多;请注意分段。
Everyone can leave himself familiy one day,may be several days ,may be several years.So we can miss families,miss our father and mother when we leave a long time.Meanwhile,our families can miss us too.nowday,the society have a lot of ways of contact with each other,for instance,call mobiephone,send a message or use the computer.We can look from the picture,a couple and their child in to talk with a computer.We know the couple are missing their child very much