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With more and more severe pollution,measures to deal with various pollution is in great need,but putting a "pollution tax"on private cars seems not a very appropriate way. First,as we all know,variaties of pollution is caused not only by cars.It's unfair to only let them pay for pollution.Then,cars is of great significance to many people,which makes it impossible for them to avoid taxes by not using the car any more. In conclusion,reducing car using by taxing may not be appropriate.
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