2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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IF my friends visit my hometown,I will take them to Huangshan, which is the place where i grow up. IN my hometown, there are many rice paddies and peach ,and lots of tourists visit there per year.What's the most famous view spot is the old building,xidi and Hongcun, which are the world culture heritages, and promote the economic growth in local govenment,