2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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A strong will is a important foundation of success.Because the beginning is easy too often but the persistting is the most difficult.At the beginning,individuals have a strong body and biggest drive to do something.As for at the middle,the strong body have consumed a little and generally the drive consumed a little too and many people have gave up.But a few people have kept the strong drive until finish a case.So this people who have persisted on will accomplish big case. So do students,you would not became a person who have advantages if not study hard.In order to be a good person,we must have a strong will to do anything,especially study hard when we was young.