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AIDS is an incurable disedses thoughout the world,no matter where,AIDS is very serious.Esperially in the Chinese because she is a country with a large population,so she have a huge crowd of HIV infection,so care for AIDS population is a great social project. How should we care for HIV infection?This not an easy thing,our country with a large population but a lot of people still donnot know AIDS.how it is broadcast and how to prevent,they donnot this all about AIDS knowladge.So the frist step is to strengthen the AIDS knowladge education,let more and more people know what is AID and how to prevent it. Esperially know how to treat HIV infected patents.Caring for AIDS,we need respect HIV curabler,and treat them in sincerely,and donnot use strange light to see them or try to stay away them .In fact they are innocent,have to face death and surival social opinion,no matter who they are ,they are still a member of society,we should care for them,even a simple hug,a common dinner,this are one of the most warm -heart of love. TO care for AIDS need our joint effort,let more people know about AIDS espercially teenagers,to look afer AIDS to trans love.
