单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
My good friend My good friend is a beautiful woman. She likes red coat,so we always call her "red girl".She is very clever.She often read books and write daily. She has many friends and we all like her. She has a handsome son and this is a happy family.I don't meet to her everyday,but we sometimes call.