小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my good friend is xiaoming. he is 2 years old the year. he is very cute and lovely My good friend is xiaoming. He is 12 years old. He has yellow hair and warmheated. He likes swiming and watching movie cartoon. His partens love him so much. but He is going to the countryside to look afer his grandmother with his Dad in this weekend.