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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact As is seen in the picture,we can learn about some information that two people in the picture who are seeing the computer screen .They seem to chat and see with their parents online.Their parents say we look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs the for something to eat . The picture disclose a important which is that electronic communication can replace face to face or not. The issue give us great consideration. With greatly development of technology,some electronic facilities afford lot of convenience in some extent ,but ,i think that we can rely on it about anything ,we should to use it reasonly. The reason for electronic communication can not replace face to face are as follows.On the one hand ,face to face can enhance emotion between people and people.On the another hand .face to face can protect our eyesight from electronic facilities . In my view , i strongly think that electronic communication can not replace face to face.
