2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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noting succeeds without a strong will Constantly droping wears stone away,we human shoud have stong will when doing things.strong will can do good for us ,strong will guarantee our success.we may do noting without strong will. I always inspration by NApoleon,he has great ambition to conquer europe ,as we all know it is a diffcult iob,but he insited and finally succeed.there is no dout that he can ont finished his dream by having a strong will.only has strong will can he or she complete the great mission. Sudents are the gorup facing a lot of challenge,they must form a habit of keeping up ; we must study hard with strong will or we may do noting only wast time