字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用。
Described in the picture are two different scenes- the left man feels upset for dropping down a bottle of milk, while the right one is optimistic due to the situation where there is still some milk left.- reflecting two different world-view No surprisingly, the drawer of the picture intends to convey more potential meanings. Indeed, the opinions to an incident do reflect the actor's inner heart, and which is also essential to ones' proper functioning next. As we always say” being optimistic to casualty, the luckiness follows happily.” Moreover, the world-view carries important implications for how life seeks. The pessimistic views do harmful, eventually, may contribute to pay the needless and predictable cost. From my personal perspective,primary education plays a key role in laying foundation of personal world-view, while being an adult, the lasting change can only be effected by the ourselves, suggesting that we should try to encourage ourselves to shape an optimistic attitude in daily life.