托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第40篇:你认为那些有名的运动员或消遣者理应挣高薪吗

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With the technology developed,our life become more and more colorful.Above all that we are becomeing more and more tight.As well as we have lots of sports and entertainment programs.Since it athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year.In my eyes,i think these people does not deserve such high salaries.Why i think that is that 3 aspects. First of all,we clear know that why our world change into such colorful from simple one.The question is technology and scientist'works who deserve such high salaries.With so many years works they told us who we are,where we live and what is life by evidences which draw it from test. Secondly,everything will be out of society expect technology.The past years we liked ping-pong,but now we like football and basketball and we always ignore the ping-pong sport when we are swicthing channel. Thirdly,as people,we always hope we are stronger than other beings and more colorful than others.Since that there are many people are enthusiasm on sports and entertainment.In fact,what really make you stronger than others is that what you have in heart. We always hope others can focus on us so that we could not think we are alone.We have someone who draw their eyes on us.But the truth is that just you feel alone.