2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a beautifu city,Beijing is the captial of China.It`s the center of China about culture and academic.If you want to visist Beijing ,The Forbidden City must be firt choice,It shows Chinese priness's history. There are many universities in Beijing，the most popular two are Beijing universtry and Qinghua universitry，the two is not only holy place in all Chinese students，but also good place to visit with beautiful scene。