小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I had a dog, its name is BaoBao, its mean the same baby in English. I love her very much. but now she left me, because she had ill, I had take her went to hospital ,but doctor had not any way for her ill . I fell very sad when she dead. until now I cant ferget her .