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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
As a student from Inner Mongolia,I recommand Hulun Beier Grasslands to my foreign friend to view in my hometown.In my opinion,it is a big feast of view with white goats on the green grand under the deep blue sky. What's more?The large and growing amount of people are eager to breathe the clean and fresh air around the grasslands beause there are increasing pollution at many big city in other provinces.And I consider that he will be fond of the place as well.Besides,there are lots of delicious food such as roast the whole mutton,kumiss and so on.Most importantly,the local national dancing is very excellent and beautiful. This interesting place will be attractive,I think.
