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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中从句使用量偏少；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Dear Mr. John, I hope you everything is going well. I am Hubin who attended the New York fair and I ettattned 5670# new product of your company. I am interested in it very much. would you sent me the price list and intsructon about this product. Thanks for attetion. I wish we will have a good business relationship in the future. Best regards, Hubin
