小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend I have a friend, her name is Li Li. She like bananas, potatos, tomatoes and ice-cream, but she doesn't like humburger. She like playing soccer. She has three basketball , but she dosen't like basketball. She has a hat . Where is she's hat? It's on the bed . She's book's are everywhere——in her bookcase , on the table , on the sofa. "where is my book's?" Li Li alwys asks.