2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays As is seen in the chart,we can learn from that with the receiving of higer educaution,the unemployment rates became more and more better.For istance , the Doctoral degree of workes earn much money than the high school dipioma of the workes , the difference in income is terrific between Doctoral degree and high school diploma ,the average of unemployment is 7.6% in the two thousand and eleven.Hence, we can naturly arrive at the conclusion which income and unemployment rate can attach important to education. why did the phenomenon take place? For it some reasons can explain as follows. Firstly,high education is helpful to receive more skills ,greatly satifying our the need of jod.Futhrmore,high education,it is crutial for us to enhance our comprohensive quality which is benefict to company . what has been discussed about ,I strongly think as long as we receive the higher education, we have the posibility of earning high income and improving our social status.