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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13037
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

I have spent a weekend from 29.Nov to 30.Nov staying at the St.Rogers Hotel in Beijing, I didn’t realize that I had left my bag at the hotel until I got home. Could you please check your Lost and Found Department and see if my bag is there? The bag is small and blue. Its contents are some of my clothes, two books and one file which is very important to me. I would appreciate if you could contact me as soon as possible. It would be very grateful if you could send the bag to me by EMS. My phone number is 123456789. Thank you for you help.

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