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Living in the world which completition going increasingly fierce,we all think that we will happiness without problems.However,what's exactly someone said,"happiness is not obsence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."It's subtly reveals the truth. There are seveal compelling reasons to evidence my viewpoint.Initially,it's not geniune happiness that we have not problems,which were let us dapressed and aimless.Additionally,we able to obtain happiness and contend through solving the problems.A good case in this point is that we study maths.We should continuously work out the questions,which make great progress. As a matter of fact,it is important for us to develop our ability to deal with problems and be happy.First and foremast,we ought to broken our horizons and enhance our knowledge,which have ability to deal with problems.What's more,we also can gain happiness by dealing with it.
